The poster is supposed to illustrate the cultural issue in NZ. The idea come from the statistic from an essay of Victoria University(http://www.victoria.ac.nz/sacl/about/cpf/publications/pdfs/2015/WP09_2014_Indicators-of-Inequality.pdf) less and less Maori speaks Maori. The English flag covers the face of a Maori suggests that the language occupies Maori people.
The major issue on it is the headline does not catch viewer's eye while the tagline does not explain the situation properly(and is not on the right place as well). The tutor suggests that the tagline is better to place under the headlines.
That is another version with different style of the same image.
The original photo. I have considered that the copyright could be a problem that needs to be figured out later.
That is the very first concept which i should have already abandoned but suggested to pick it back by Phoebe, my tutor.
As tutors always say, better to print it out first to see how it works. First of all, both headline and tagline are difficult to recognise on the poster. Besides, there is an unexpected blank area around the poster but it actually works well on the page.
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