The clarity of meaning on this poster is vague in many different aspect.
First of all, the viewers are not be able to recognise the fern in the teacup. Because of the bad drawing, they recognise it as a kind of iconic pattern of smoke. It is a vital problem i have to fix at first.
The blur green background does not function as well as what i expected. That is supposed to be a contract to the fern in the front.
Furthermore, it is better to draw the teacup by myself (The white outline is quiet obvious).
There is an obvious pixelated issue on it, which means that i need to change a high resolution picture.
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