Development of the second poster

To be honest, i have known that it is not a good example as an illustration. i have known that i should have shown the fern in the middle is weak or ill as i manage to present that Maori is restricted by English. The fern on The background are ferns meant to contract to the fern in the middle to show that it is not growing well.


One on one meeting
Donald pointed out the issue of clarity. The fern still looks growing well. Besides, my drawing technology is not satisfied now. He advised me to take a photo of a real teacup and shows the English flag on the table.
Besides, to show the weakness of the fern. He advised me to draw the fern smaller or or show it with a more weak appearance. Rather that drawing the earth on it, it could be better to show the table on the image.